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Virtual Reality
Erotic Romance - (Rated E-rotic)

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Sensual Reads Review
Reviewed by Deborah

http://sensualreads.net

July 2005

In VIRTUAL REALITY, award winning writer Joey W. Hill, brings us an erotic and intriguing tale of passion, longing and acceptance. Beautifully descriptive and hypnotic in its prose, the story follows Nicole and Mark, virtual partners, who are brought together one life-changing day.

VIRTUAL REALITY gives the reader a fascinating glimpse into the dominant/submissive lifestyle. Ms Hill tackles the issue with great sensitivity and decorum, taking her time to build her characters and let us learn through them. From the outset her descriptions are subtly sensuous, her characterization mesmerizing. This is truly a story which indulges the senses, from the delicately described settings, to the emotionally wrenching last scenes.

It must be noted that there is some strong language within the story, yet it is infrequently used. When such words do appear it is well within the context of the story and profanities do not appear merely for the sake of it .From first to last this was a superb read that left me wanting more .I have never been so moved by a book before and I was truly amazed at Ms Hill’s capacity to convey such human emotions in print.

NovelSpot Romance Reviews
Reviewed By Maitresse © March 2005

http://earthchildseries.com/NovelBlog

March 2005

Rating: 5 Quills

Joey Hill knows that many of those attracted to the BDSM scene are the walking wounded, coping in one way or another with damaged souls. She knows that the D/s mindset finds those whose spiritual calluses are the toughest (after all, what does a callus cover but that which was once the most tender?) or the most fragile; and being two sides of the same coin, the opposites of this spectrum are drawn together like magnets.

In this day and time, computer dating is commonplace. The Internet is something that touches most people's lives now, and in the universe of people who read eBooks and who incorporate computers in a utilitarian way into their lives, there is probably not a single soul who has not experienced some form of online romance. Virtual relationships are part of contemporary experience. Virtual relationships are strange creatures though, because everything is filtered through the conduit of words. Language, in virtual reality, is the vehicle of love. And it is clear that Joey Hill knows this. Words are her tools, her playthings, and her instruments.

Joey Hill is just plain gifted with words, and using one of the best devices I've seen a writer employ, grants her hero the gift of words too. Thus empowered, Mark, the Dominant hero of Virtual Reality talks his way into the heart of his tentative, willing and submissive Shy Kitten, Nicole. Online the two of them remain incognito. They know and love each other as intimately as two people can--a rare communication contingent on courage, understanding, passion and compassion. But they don't know each other's locations or names, or because they haven't exchanged photographs, even their basic appearances. Their whole lives revolve around their online power exchange, but in this story once the exchange becomes real, Mark pronounces that the day--and their time together in person--will end. Joey Hill takes her elemental knowledge and with it paints for us a Dom and a sub whose togetherness begins on the Internet, but whose relationship is just too much to be contained online, and seeps out into the real world when the sub--against the wishes of her Dom--seeks him out. This leads to the really big question here: Mark is truly a wounded duck with a dark history that works against him. Will he accept Nicole into his life? Or will he turn her away?

There are two elements in this story which make it stand out. First is the intimate voice, which cuts straight through to the characters' emotions. Second is the language. Nothing else reveals as clearly that we humans are mental as well as physical animals, and our emotions can be stirred, and built, and broken with mere words. This is an intimate look at a D/s relationship. If you aren't into words as seduction, this book is not for you. The language here is powerful, moving, and sexual. A must read for the D/s crowd.

Just Erotic Romance Reviews
Reviewed by Barb Chan 

December 2004 

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Rating: 5 Stars

Virtual Reality is a passionate, poignant tale, filled with angst, anger, and love. Mark is a powerful Dom, but also a very angry man. Although he has the potential to care deeply for a woman, the tumult of emotions within him could also easily destroy both him and a sensitive woman like Nicole. Nicole comes to Mark after having emerged somewhat out of her shell, wanting to show him the woman she has become under his tutelage. The two have an electrifying chemistry that infuses each page of this book with heat. Too, the sex was emotional and charged with meaning. Scenes flowed beautifully from chapter to chapter, until I was surprised and sad to come to the end. This is yet another must-read story from the ever-talented Joey Hill.

Mon-Boudoir Erotica For Women
Reviewed by Frauke

October 2004

http://www.mon-boudoir.de 

Rating:5.0 / Sensuality:4.5

This story is a rare jewel, something that you don’t find often. I can hardly tell in words what I think and feel about it, and I think it takes something to make me speechless. The story tells about the one day Nicole and Mark meet, so you have the feeling you read in real time what is going on. Sometimes this story line is interrupted by retrospects, but it complements rather than disturbs the full understanding of the feelings and actions of the characters. There were times while reading I was on the edge of crying – when, for example, Marks believes he is a monster and Nicole deserves someone better. Then there were times I could hardly breathe, so full of love were the scenes, so that you wished that there was someone out there who cares as much about you as they do for each other.

If you think D/s has something to do with humiliation and violence, you are wrong; it has something to do with intimacy and trust, and, in the best case, with love. So if you have prejudices against Dominant/Submissive-stories, reading this one is the best way to overcome them and experience a wonderful story about second chances you shouldn’t miss. The author concentrates fully on Nicole and Mark, no second characters disturbing the captivating atmosphere, mirroring the closeness between them. Creating a world only for lovers, where only the two of them exist and no one else, so that you as reader sometimes have the irrational feeling you are disturbing them. Nevertheless, you can’t put this book down.

What more could I say than “Virtual Reality” is one of the most excellent, heart-aching and touching love stories I ever read?

eCataRomance Reviews
Reviewed by: Christine - "Romanticafanatic"

October 2004

http://www.ecataromance.com

Rating: 4-1/2 Stars

Joey W. Hill has shared with us a sensual feast that will engage your heart, mind, body, and soul in this story of the sizzlingly sensual submission of Shy Kitten, as she breaks the bonds of “Virtual Reality” to claim her heart’s desire, her Master, a man who will lead her into a maelstrom of mastery unlike anything she could have imagined.

Nicole is a good girl, a law-abiding citizen, until the day she went and broke the rules of their “Virtual Reality”, to find The Master she knew would take her demure and subservient soul and body, and mold them into the reality of his every desire. Having settled for less most of her life, she wonders if she is just intrigued by the fantasies he weaves with his words, or has finally realized that she has chosen the path of a true submissive

Mark has the sensual soul of a poet, he’s a man with a heartrending gift for words who spends his time putting pen to paper, or tapping out keys on a keyboard, all of the things he dreams about. Becoming a virtual recluse after having his heart crushed by a woman he loved, his incredible strength of character carried him through that devastating time in his life when he had nothing else to fall back on. Buried deep within his heart and mind, are all of the dreams he is terrified of making reality, and now he is faced with the one person who will try to unearth his very soul from the depths of despair, someone who will love him so unconditionally she will put her life into his strong and capable hands. Will he accept her gift of submission and truly master her heart, mind, body, and soul? Perhaps the Master will become the slave…

I love the depth of these characters. I really feel Mark’s fury, pain, and isolation. I feel how much he loves Nicole, and how he craves to work his mastery over her with tender domination, and how he feels the necessity of denying himself that pleasure. I envy Nicole’s core of strength that equals her sensuously submissive soul. Her love pulls him from his safe hiding place where he yearns deep in his soul for what she offers him. After reading “Virtual Reality” by Joey W. Hill, I guarantee, you’ll never again be able to look at, much less partake of, a salad without thinking of Shy Kitten and her Master. *WINK*

Sizzling Romances
Reviewed by Crystal 

December 2004 

http://sizzlingromances.tripod.com 

Rating: Four Flames

In VIRTUAL REALITY, Joey W. Hill slowly leads the reader into the relationship between a dominant and his submissive and reveals the intricacies therein. The use of Internet to launch and maintain the bond was a fantastic addition to the story, making it possible that even upon the first meeting between Nicole and Mark in the flesh, they are already entangled in a well-established, honest and trusting relationship. Ms. Hill does a convincing job in writing Nicole’s uncertainty in approaching Mark and later as the two of them explore their relationship out of the virtual world. I also enjoyed getting a glimpse of Mark’s own hesitations as he tries to reconcile his virtual role with reality while also trying to maintain his hold on his potentially overwhelming anger. It seems that the focus of BDSM stories is generally on the submissive and his/her feelings, and in VIRTUAL REALITY, Ms. Hill did a good job of humanizing Mark.

Fallen Angel Reviews
Reviewed by: Donna

September 2004

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Rating: 5 Angels

This book is about finding and trusting not only yourself, but your partner and the journey to get there. I loved reading about Mark and Nicole's journey; you feel their emotions right along with them. Ms. Hill takes you into their world and doesn't let you go, even when the last word is read. This is not only a keeper but one you will want to run out and tell your friends about.

Just Erotic Romance Reviews Newsletter
Reviewer: Barb Chan

September 2004

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Rating: 5 Stars Heat level: O

Virtual Reality is a passionate, poignant tale, filled with angst, anger, and love. Mark is a powerful Dom, but also a very angry man. Although he has the potential to care deeply for a woman, the tumult of emotions within him could also easily destroy both him and a sensitive woman like Nicole. Nicole comes to Mark after having emerged somewhat out of her shell, wanting to show him the woman she has become under his tutelage. The two have an electrifying chemistry that infuses each page of this book with heat. Too, the sex was emotional and charged with meaning. Scenes flowed beautifully from chapter to chapter, until I was surprised and sad to come to the end. This is yet another must-read story from the ever-talented Joey Hill.

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